Settled on this for the second page, making the first three panels in the original, their own. Does this seem pointless for a simple page to work out some techniques? Yes. Do I mind? Not really.
Ha. I like the description of this page. I always do stuff like this. In the end it may seem superfluous but at least you learn something.
I love the line work in this, along with the grey tones. Not the biggest fan of the subject but the craft is too good not to like!
What do you have against men looking at other men?
There's something extremely dope about this... nice work with the grey tones.